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Do not kill that bear
I won't let people kill bears
Please help me do that
"Dogs"
I feel bad for dogs
Being kicked out on the road
It's not fair, you see
Thursday, April 17, 2008
575 W. Haiku Heaven
I'm a teacher. My job is demanding, but sometimes... all is made worth it come the Haiku poetry writing unit. Also, a quickly approaching May helps, but ah yes.... the children's Haikus. So good. Thanks, Danavee, for passing along these two samples of syllabic brilliance. Your kids have made my day.
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These are AWARD WINNING haikus!!!!
ReplyDeleteNo doubt... no doubt. In fact, when I read these poems, I can feel sparkles raining down ever so lightly on me. The sparkles are gold... silver.... and copper.
ReplyDeleteThe Cloud - A Haiku
ReplyDeleteGold, Silver, Copper
Floating, drifting, hovering
A cloud over me
"A Once Extraordinary Haiku Until Somebody Screwed It Up"
ReplyDeleteDanavee's first name
Uses many syllables
no more room for wit
Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We'll blame my parents!
ReplyDeleteNICE FAMILY
ReplyDeletelooks can and are deceiving
ReplyDeleteWhat in the HELL does Looks can and are deceiving mean? Who are these people.
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